Peace...
after life
She began as soon as death's rattle had imprinted
Into her happily ever after
Life. She danced among the wrung rhythms, the fading
Echo. No longer haunted, no longer
Numb. Consciously
Choosing a future after the
End had won.
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Caroline Jane
CJ lost the plot a long time ago. Now, she writes to explore where all paths lead, collecting crumbs of perspective as her pen travels. One day, she may have enough for a cake, which will, no doubt, be fruity.
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'20/20'
"Do It Again" the track that would ultimately open the Beach Boys final album on Capitol Records which was released on February 10th 1969 had originally been released as a single in August of 1968. The track was the first of many post-Pet Sounds era throwbacks to the early Beach Boys sound which would become continually more cliched and eventually lead the Beach Boys to the level of self-parody they would eventually succumb to in the 1980s while their closest contemporaries The Beatles nearing the end of their run in 1969 would go on to be viewed as the most influential band of all time. However, the song itself is not bad on its surface, and it opens with a futuristic sounding (for 1969) drumbeat captured by then-Beach Boys engineer Stephen Desper using tape delays on the drums performed by Dennis Wilson and John Guerin. The song has been re-recorded numerous times over the years on various Beach Boys-related projects most notably the 2011 re-recording at Capitol studios featuring the five surviving Beach Boys at the time backed instrumentally by various members of both the Brian Wilson Band and Mike Loves touring "Beach Boys" to promote the then upcoming Beach Boys 50th Anniversary reunion tour in 2012. The hammering and power drill sound at the end of the song was an excerpt from a track called "Workshop" that was to be a part of the uncompleted "SMiLE" album.
By Sean Callaghan7 days ago in Beat
Comments (37)
love nature one time heaven..I love the freedom
A resilient transformation from mourning to liberation, embracing a new beginning despite death’s shadow, dancing into a renewed future.
oof that end hit home for me.
I love the freedom I felt in this. Beautifully penned, Caroline :)
Incredible work!
Congratulations on a beautiful Acrostic poem.
Very thought-provoking Caroline. 😊 Top job! 👏
congrats for the top story
The deliberate split of after and Life not only works with the acrostic, but the overall mood too- a new start. Sadness here, but also the promise of a new beginning. Heavy in so few words Caroline!
Hauntingly beautiful. This one resonates and reverberates deep inside me. Soulfully written, my friend. <3
Congrats, Caroline! Such an impactful and memorable piece!
All I can say is WOW! 🤩🤩🤩🤩Deserves TS❣️Congrats🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
So haunting and so beautiful. Congratulations on the Top Story.
Really Beautiful
This has a lot of depth and history that I feel you can relate to 👏
Congratulations to one of Vocal Social Society's best! Cheers!
Really deep and thoughtful. Hat raised to TS.
So powerful.
Congrats on TS!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
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Beautiful poem
Ok, you broke my emotional piggy bank for the day. This was fragile yet powerful. Congratulations!
You're just an artist, aren't you, Caroline? Just no how to make something elevated, grandiose, but intimate and full of feeling and poetic greatness. Just, yeah, well done. I'm bloody worried now lol. Congrats too on Top Story!
There it is. Congrats on the TS