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Pain

Just an emotion

By Ramim AkondoPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
Just an emotion

Such a distressing feeling

Sadly, they notice only when you bleed from outside.

But, what about my heart?

It’s bleeding uncontrollably.

What about my soul?

It’s crying and shivering from pain.

The pain, no one sees.

The pain, distressing my brain.

The pain, piercing my heart & soul.

The pain, I hope they see when

I'm gone…

sad poetry

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Ramim Akondo

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  • Jason “Jay” Benskin10 months ago

    The final lines, about hoping others see it when the speaker is gone, reflect a raw yearning for understanding and empathy.

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