Pain in the Back
A comic and poem about writer's back pain -_-
By J. JayPublished 2 years ago • Updated 2 years ago • 1 min read

Drawn by me :)




Word Hunt
Ow, my back.
I’m hunched up like a crab,
writing and crowding
my many notepads.
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Why sit like a princess
and pick at my words?
When I can scuttle like squirrels
far out in the woods?
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Words like to grow
so I get on their level.
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They leak into reality
and I chase them;
though,
they often laugh at me.
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Words
are like a cloaked old woman.
They’ll only speak
when you lean forward
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And
listen.
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Comments (6)
Good one, loved it!
Ooh, that ending, I love it. "Words are like a cloaked old woman. They’ll only speak when you lean forward - - - - - And listen." The number of times I've sat back in my chair and had no ideas, only to lean over my keyboard and type away...TOO ACCURATE.
Hahahahahahahahaha I think this whole thing is about me! I loved it!
Love it! Awesome poem!
have you met me before? coz as a student, this is EXTREMELY accurate. And being a bookworm probably doesn't help either. ow. this was a great read and i love your drawings too <3
WOW! Very amazing work!!