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When suns bled I thought
If no one ever knows, then
Pain is felt in vain.
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Rachel Steinmetz
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Comments (4)
so so well done! the rhyme at the end gives it the perfect finish!
This haiku is so interesting. I will think about this concept for a while.
Intense and descriptive. Really well written 🩵
Beautiful!