As if transcribed to the tune of her fashionably
scribed eyes as he delves within,
touching her tone.
fearless serenity, fainting,
as if an addict slowly fading thin
he takes time to breathe in
diminishing what was written;
a scorching burn of her moans.
The sky is relinquishing
Intoxicating serenity, delight,
as her star shoots across as the
final twinkle in his eyes.
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Comments (3)
Fantastic job! Such great writing!
This whole piece is brilliant and that ending! Mind Blown!
Nice writing ❤️ I think I really need to work on mine