Over and over again
A rondel for Randy's Prompted #3
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I tried one more time
and failed again
I could feel all of the pain
This hill is too high to climb...
The knowledge I got is a prize
From failure I learned to gain, but then...
I tried one more time
and failed again.
Finally the success is mine
I left behind all the haters
focusing on my supporters
At the end I proudly smile:
"I tried one more time!"
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Written for Randy's April Writer's Challenge:
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Love the intention behind this poem.
Your poem is a lovely place to learn something, Thank you!
Never give up, always try as you mentioned you will gain knowledge. Inspirational
"Just keep swimming, swimming, swimming" Always remember Dory said this. Hehehe. Loved your poem!
Delightful, Anna! The little poet who could!
Doesn’t matter if there’s 1,000 failures, as long as there’s 1,001 tries❤️ nice job ! 😊
Yes keep trying and learning to get up and you will get there. Big hugs.