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Out of the blue
There you were
Taking me out
Showing me a good time
Smiles and laughs
Feeling good and
Feeling hope
*
Then slowly it turned
I felt you slipping
Where there was giddiness
Now there is wondering
Why have things shifted
Where did you go
And now I care
*
As soon as you came
You left
Making me feel
And then leaving me cold
Stirring up feelings
I didn’t intend to have
And now there is silence
About the Creator
Christina Vanhaerents
Cluttered mind, chaotic life, and a heavy heart... I write to keep sane.
Instagram: @cmvwrites
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Comments (5)
This poem took me to every time I got my hopes up to have them dashed. Great job
Relatable on many levels. Beautifully crafted! 💕💕💕
beautiful!
Ah, a feeling I can relate to! Lovely writing.
Oof girl I felt this to my utter core. WELCOME TO VOCAL