“Our Tree”
Breath in, breath out
Draw in, bring down
Aim true, let be
It’s you, gets me
The wind, it’s breeze
Whisper, sweetly
Pine tree, oak leaf
I see, nothing
One shot, or three
Fly free, hits me
Perfect, can be
Our love, archery
-CWH-
About the Creator
Corey W Harland
Retired soldier, writing as a therapy, hobby, and as a dream career as I go. I hope to fill this page with poetry, photographs, and stories that will inspire all who read to embrace their own beauty and let their own lights shine bright!
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