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ostracism

a poem

By Moon DesertPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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they all ate her up

from top to bottom and from every side

they had a lot; they knew too much

they allowed themselves this little crack

for whoever has much will receive more

whoever has nothing will be executed on the spot

no matter how hard you try

you’ll never get away from this, so relax

they are wrong, not you

they think they’re doing good, but it’s not true

the other side is reversed, full of smooth

sweet ice covering the cake

not much credit as they cut all the strings

they think they’re pulling them, but not quite

they don’t know, they want control

their role is not that of kings, but of scullery maids

a skein of seaweed trapped in a weir

seamen on ships would not be happy about this

cleaning all docks

to finally forget about everything

on the way to new heights

from which they can quickly fall

more painfully than she ever could

describing all the details with meticulous hooks

throat-grabbing

these beasts galore

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Moon Desert

UK-based

BA in Cultural Studies

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock2 years ago

    There's something almost Monty Python-esque about this, something between regaling & ridiculing others for their self-proclaimed authority in matters of which they are most boorishly ignorant. I like it.

  • Mother Combs2 years ago

    💙💚🖤💜

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