Organ Rebellion
The Dead Live On Within

This All Hollows' Eve
The organs will speak again
Making statements how they grieve
For those donating them
***
They volunteered, not, to abdicate
The bodies from which they came
They were simply trying to regulate
Biochemical tasks in their frame
***
They worked so hard to keep everything running
All processes in solidarity
The bodies gave ne'er a thought of becoming
Or succumbing to mortality
***
The heart pumped blood to every cell
And allowed, every tissue, breath
So very well nobody could tell
That there was any chance of death
***
The kidneys filtered out all the crud
That accumulated from functionality
And put out the trash that spoiled the blood
They urinated with punctuality
***
Can't live, without, what's called a liver
To detoxify all the poisons in corpus
Yet, the irresponsible continued to deliver
Toxins that overwhelmed its purpose
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Then, ironic trauma to their bodily hosts
When the wrong place led to dispatch
Car crashes, homicides, even John Does
Taken to labs in search of a match
***
They had no idea they would join some list
Of those who wrecked organs of their own
With alcohol, sugars, things hedonist
Or competed by steroid hormone
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Now they're removed and transplanted
Replacing organs no longer in tune
Why, they asked, should they be granted
To losers who freely chose their doom?
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Come All Hollows' Eve they will talk back
To their new hosts who refuse to change
A memo so strong, that they will attack
'Less normal values are put back in range
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The woman now wearing corneas of others
Will be haunted by visions of death in her eyes
The message will be so frightfully clear that it smothers
To the point that she horribly dies
***
The man with the new heart is in danger already
Blocking, with new plaque, the arteries within it
It fibrillates to make rhythms unsteady
Till he grabs his chest on his third buttered biscuit
***
The heart races its pulse incredibly fast
And flutters as he cuts his filet
He sweats profusely and his face breathes its last
And he falls on his smoking ashtray
***
The borrowed liver man continues to drink
Insists it is why he's a fellow so mellow
It isn't the hard stuff, just beer, he thinks
So his new liver answers, making him yellow
***
Two men with new kidneys, they came by the pair
Kept all the bad habits that lost, theirs, tenure
They knew they could find others to share
So each new kidney stopped wholly in failure
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Some eyes glazed over, pupils fixed and dilated
One heart kept beating but into the ground
One liver stopped living until death awaited
The fluids built up until the recipients all drowned
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There are those, deservedly so,
Who are gifted with unselfish presents
Those who wasted their health, though,
Should reconsider their contents
***
This Halloween those with second chances
Should respect their new leases and releases from strife
If they don't reckon their circumstances
They'll be packing the truck for the afterlife
About the Creator
Gerard DiLeo
Retired, not tired. Hippocampus, behave!
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Comments (2)
Hahahahahahahhahahaha I love how ypu killed them all off! Serves them right!
Yeah, better take care of this one, because it might be your last. Made me think of the culinary uses of organ meat. Liver is the only thing I can stand. Heart is too stringy and tough, kidney tastes like urine, intestine and tripe...well, best not dwell there unless in sausages.