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Opposite Fates

a poem

By Moon DesertPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - September 2025
Photo by Dante Janssens on Unsplash

Across the river's flow,

we lead separate, distant lives.

Never breaching our safe zones.

Forever strangers we remain.

Unimaginable destinies, disconnected from reality,

living behind the barbed wire,

heads crowned with thorns.

A boulevard of sorrow,

strewn with fallen leaves.

Memories of a chilling autumn,

a time when we'd lost

our final shred of grace.

We must rest now.

Lost in our separate dreams,

drifting towards eternity,

formless and scentless.

Where innovation's potential dies,

choked by minds

too small to embrace it.

Unable to move on, hands free,

from the greatest gift we crave.

Peace of mind, a prize won

at a cost we can't afford.

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To my mother

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Thank you for reading!

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About the Creator

Moon Desert

UK-based

BA in Cultural Studies

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  • Muhammed Ismail4 months ago

    I liked your poem . Congratulations on your top story, and hope you enjoy my stories abd i will be very happy if you subscribe me ❤️

  • Such a poignant and moving poem—the imagery of distance and sorrow really lingers. Beautifully written.

  • Sandy Gillman4 months ago

    This is so haunting and tender. Congrats on Top Story.

  • Tiffany Gordon4 months ago

    Sensational writing!

  • Krysha Thayer4 months ago

    I love the way you describe the two distinct types of lives that people live on either side of a divide. It's very well written. Congrats on Top Story!

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