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Opioids in the Holler

A Hunt Through Appalachia’s Broken Hills

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
Opioids in the Holler
Photo by Oscar Ochoa on Unsplash

We been huntin a long while now

Not for deer or bear

for somethin smaller

somethin that gets inside a person

and won’t let go

It started with pain

a back broke down in the mine

a hand crushed workin steel

a doctor sayin take one of these

and get some rest

Now the hollers are full of ghosts

walkin on two legs

lookin for a way back home

We search where the laughter used to be

by the river

behind the high school bleachers

in trailers with the lights still on at dawn

The hunt wears you thin

We pray in parking lots

and wait outside the jail

We pray names into the dark

hopin somebody hears

Every soul we save feels like spring

and every loss lays heavy as scripture

Sometimes one of em steps out of the fog

eyes clear

hands shakin

sayin I made it through

We wrap em up like kin

and thank God for the breath in their chest

This ain’t a hunt for killin

It’s a hunt for keepin

for bringin our people back from the edge

for chasin off the shadow

that opioids laid across these ridges

And long as there’s breath in these mountains

we’ll keep on huntin

FamilyFree VerseheartbreakMental Healthsad poetry

About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • Darla M Seely2 months ago

    Hi

  • Tiffany Gordon2 months ago

    Magnificent work! Heartfelt, truth-baring & full of compassion! I 💜 it! 💪🏾🎉

  • Sean A.2 months ago

    So sorrowful! But “every soul…feels like spring “ is a wonderfully hopeful line

  • Aspen Marie 2 months ago

    “Every soul we save feels like spring and every loss lays heavy as scripture” I’m in love with this line. Well made, Tim, as always

  • L.I.E2 months ago

    Awww this is so sad and beautiful. A powerful and positive hunt that saves. Lovely poem.

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