Open your eyes
So as you can see
Through all the lies
Feed to you and me
‘til you open your eyes
You will forever be
The fool that feeds on lies
The one who is called the newbie
Open your eyes
As wide as can be
Until you see through the lies
Feed to you and me
Open your eyes
Can’t you see
All the lies
That they have brought to be
Once you open your eyes
Wide as can be
All the lies
Fall away from you and me
Then with your open eyes
We can both see
Past all the lies
To the truth staring back at you and me
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This is soooo true! Some people are just so delusional! Loved your poem!