Oops!
a breakup nonet
By Heather ScottPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by John Rodenn Castillo on Unsplash
It was a beautiful waterfall!
So thoughtful, yes, to take me there.
When we lay down beside it,
on the blanket he’d brought,
he called out her name -
instead of mine.
Our kiss stopped.
I hiked
home.
About the Creator
Heather Scott
Writing, to keep my sanity and make some sense of the world, while keeping watch over my five children as a single parent.
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Comments (2)
OMG how fitting. Men!
Oh dear! Great poem.