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Onomatopoeia

Thump, Thump - Language Of The Heart

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Onomatopoeia
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The sound your heart makes

As my head rests on your chest

Beating promises

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About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    Awww, this was so sweet! Loved this wonderful poem!

  • I can thoroughly imagine that would be so.

  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    A perfect description of a perfect moment.

  • Mother Combs2 years ago

    lovely

  • Kendall Defoe 2 years ago

    Perfect title; perfect moment...!

  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    Oh, I loved the title and every single word, perfectly chosen. That last line was gold.

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