With one more look at her,
I could maybe come to
understand
why she wants to go.
Find the self respect
I lost so long ago.
What would happen then?
Would her eyes pull me in?
Then I surely would
want her once again.
With one more look at her.
About the Creator
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Sam Harty is a poet of raw truth and quiet rebellion. Author of Lost Love Volumes I & II and The Lost Little Series, her work confronts heartbreak, trauma, and survival with fierce honesty and lyrical depth. Where to find me
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This is so true of love and life. Well Done!!!!
I love the way you have expressed this sentiment. It is so true of love and life.
This felt soooo relatable! Loved your poem!
Powerful!
🩷lovely
Beautiful poem. Thank you for your powerful transparency when you write. ✍️ ✨😊☺️