One Afternoon In Poland
(Mel Brooks style satire meet bad taste humour? C'mon.....)
Adolf was touring Auschwitz
it was beautiful Polish autumn day
decided to pop past the barracks
it wasn't too far out of his way
with his entourage of goons and guards
they rounded the nearest hut
a strange noise masked their approach
it went phut phut phut
a little girl was bouncing a ball
and catching it on second bounce
the guards looked grim and serious
guns in hand and ready to pounce
Hitler berated them for their enthusiasm
and he approached the small female child
he didn't look mad or evil
his expression was really quite mild
"vot are you doink little girrrrl" adolf hitler asked
both his demeanor and tone were pleasant
after all he was the Fuhrer of Germany
and he was speaking to a Polish peasant
"it’s my birthday tomorrow i’m turning 11"
she said; right there on that very spot
Adolf looked her square in the eye
and he said "no...you're not"
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Quite an interesting point of view of the person who destroyed my country and not only.