On top of the mountain, the Creator and I stood
In 50 words, save the world...was I tasked! Count humanity's worth. In how many words??????!!!!!!
By Antoni De'LeonPublished 12 months ago • 1 min read
Photo by Ian Stauffer on Unsplash
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Lord, they love and care for each other!!!
Not enough!!!!
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They love the land...it replenishes, grows
The ice shelves in Antarctica...melt as we speak!!!!
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Acts of kindness overflow...that's hope
Bad outweighs good...not impressed!!!!
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Humanity is innovative...creative
The future isn't set in stone...it's shaped by choices.
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About the Creator
Antoni De'Leon
Everything has its wonders, even darkness and silence, and I learn, whatever state I may be in, therein to be content. (Helen Keller).
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Comments (13)
Very strong messages in a few words. Excellent! (The ice will melt, our hearts no.)
Illusion vs Reality! A powerful, short poem 🙏🏻✨
Truly filled with depth and a wholesome cry to our creator for our salvation. Who will truly listen. Hope it resonates with many.
Interesting take on the challenge… so many aspects of love and challenges living it out in our lives.
That felt so hopeful and optimistic. Loved your poem!
Even the lord is questioning our choices. Good thing, he loves us anyway.
Love the subjective view points here. 💖
Well-wrought! Free will is the gift, I think, that shows the love with which we were created, so to speak. "You can choose a ready guide in some celestial voice If you choose not to decide, you still have made a choice You can choose from phantom fears and kindness that can kill I will choose a path that's clear, I will choose Freewill" -Rush, Freewill
Your poem captures the delicate balance between hope and despair, emphasizing the impact of human actions on the world.
Talking to God - Yes, God would tell you - your world is shaped by your own choices!!!
Powerful lines! I love this the most: "The future isn't set in stone...it's shaped by choices." Great poem!
So deep and impactful 💯 excellent poem.
Powerful, truth-filled, thought-provoking and sent from above! Go Antoni Go! 💕🩷💝🫶🏾