A droplet, a storm
awash in ample chaos:
wave becomes ripple.
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A Dart at Dusk
Seconds ago, the sullen sun set on the two of us… my exuberant furry companion and me. A fresh breeze embraces us, delivering welcome relief from the day’s oppressive heat. His typical stumbling and staggering along — apace with a sloth — has turned into trip-trapping, high-stepping, almost skipping along.
By Angie the Archivist 📚🪶about 20 hours ago in Petlife
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How true that something so small can contribute to something so vast! Nice work with this poem!
This was so mesmerising! Beautiful work!
This captures the rhythm of the ocean so well. :)
And over again in constant rhythmic cycles.
Hey, just letting you know I shared this poem in my story Poppy's Preferences: https://shopping-feedback.today/journal/poppy-s-preferences-pt-5%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
So well written