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OH RAIN!

sad poetry

By Eiman AsifPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

"OH RAIN!

Why do all my efforts go in vain?

OH RAIN!

Why do I have to feel so much pain?

OH RAIN!

Why at last there is still no gain?

OH RAIN!

Why do I have no friends, again?

OH RAIN!

Why do not you show me a lane?

OH RAIN!

With you I share all my pain.

OH RAIN!

I feel so good when you came.

OH RAIN!

Are you going to leave again?

OH RAIN!

Goodbye! May you come again."

written by: Eiman Asif

(Multan, Pakistan)

*Rain is so calm and sweet that you can tell it all your secrets and sadness and it won't even betray you instead would make your day a bit better. Rain is not like people who leave you alone or betray you or make you even more depress or sad.

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Eiman Asif

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  • Arraycrypt2 years ago

    good one

  • Darkos2 years ago

    I feel it ! Thank you for expressing Yourself !

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