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Of Moonlight

For the "Light breaks Water" Challenge

By Annie KapurPublished 7 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Of Moonlight
Photo by Benjamin Voros on Unsplash

Moonlight upon the lake and I hear you say

that there's blueberries in the bramble yet

every time I come too close I get burned.

I fake having a smile because of you but its

exhausting me, can't you see?

Every time the full moon touches the lake I dream

of being beneath the sea,

arms out,

dress coated in water.

Every time is a second time I walk beside the

lake in the moonlight.

It throws its light

and I dream

nothing but nightmares.

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  • L.I.E7 months ago

    Deep and beautiful, love how you put the imagery (of the night and lake) to represent the strong dark emotion you feel

  • Sandy Gillman7 months ago

    This is both gorgeous and devastating at the same time.

  • Oooo, this was so poignantly beautiful! I loved it!

  • Cathy holmes7 months ago

    This a beautiful piece, Annie. Well done!

  • angela hepworth7 months ago

    This was phenomenally done, Annie. Dark and moody, yet somehow ethereal in its detail.

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