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Ode to the Fog

My Mountain Friend

By C.H. SchoenPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Ode to the Fog
Photo by Corey Agopian on Unsplash

The brilliance and blindness you bring all in one visit

To blot out my past and my future

To make me only see the present.

Your unhurried dance in the valleys

While your sister mist embraces the mountains

And kisses the evergreens.

Remaining as hushed as the first snowfall

Reminding me of a home I have never known

Revealing a path only in this trance.

The crisp air helps me know autumn

Wants follows you, and pulling my jacket close

I watch you encircle me.

The mystery of your company captures me

As I sit waiting for you to leave but

Always welcoming you back home as my old companion.

The remains of you shimmer in the grass

Highlighting each spider’s web-like diamonds in the daylight

Disappearing when the warmth reaches through the clouds.

nature poetry

About the Creator

C.H. Schoen

C.H. Schoen is a late-night writer hailing from the Midwest. Her passion includes studying the world's different belief systems and walking the land with her dogs. She can be found most nights crafting weird little stories.

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  • Abigail Penhallegon2 years ago

    The imagery of this is gorgeous, and the line about you pulling your jacket closer puts me into the poem. Beautiful. I also love the first line, setting up the idea of fog as something that is both beautiful and a blocker of other beauties

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