October Rain
This title was inspired by the beautiful song "October Rain" by Eden Golan
The leaves now hold brown and red,
If from the blood and mud, unknown.
And the patch of grass still growing
Speaks of wary wounds unsewn.
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The breath of smoke clogging,
October lungs forever black.
The wind is building her strength
but blowing memories of souls and the lack.
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Words cannot decipher hearts,
And all that they are now missing.
Here where Spring and Sun turn cold,
Here where pain and healing are kissing.
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October will forever cry,
from year to year to year...
And only time will have the guts
to try to dry its tear.
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The leaves are now dirtied with blood and mud,
The ground with buried pain.
And now I'm just waiting...
Waiting for the October Rain.
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In this peice, I tried to express the mixed emotioins felt
on this symbolic day, October 7. On the one hand,
it is a year later and time to get up and rise once again. But on
the other hand, the atrocoties that happened on this day are
absolutely irreparable.
About the Creator
Rachel Steinmetz
Written expression is emotion at its peak; delve into it.



Comments (1)
this is so beautiful! Love this line: October lungs forever black. Love how you took the song and tweaked it to something else entirely! ❤️💔❤️💔