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“Ocean of Lies” 🥀

Happily Ever After 💓

By Brianna LongshawPublished 7 years ago 1 min read
“Ocean Of Lies” 🥀

The More I Fell For Him,

The Deeper I Walked Into His Ocean,

The More He Lied To Me,

The More I Felt As If I Was Drowning In His Ocean Of Lies.

Every Lie He Told Me,

Pulled Me Under More And Before I Knew It,

I Was Sinking To The Bottom And He Didn’t Want To Pull Me Up,

As The Last Bit Of Oxygen Left My Lungs,

I Decided That I Was Officially Done.

I Braved Up And Pulled Myself From The Bottom,

And As I Reached The Top,

He Tried To Grab Me But I Wouldn’t Allow Him To,

I Came Up And Inhaled The Beginning Of My New Life.

inspirational

About the Creator

Brianna Longshaw

“Reading Is Like Breathing In, Writing Is Like Breathing Out” 🦋

My instagram: @storiesatsunset

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  • Regina De Guzman2 years ago

    It hits me really hard thanks for sharing this poet

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