
The More I Fell For Him,
The Deeper I Walked Into His Ocean,
The More He Lied To Me,
The More I Felt As If I Was Drowning In His Ocean Of Lies.
Every Lie He Told Me,
Pulled Me Under More And Before I Knew It,
I Was Sinking To The Bottom And He Didn’t Want To Pull Me Up,
As The Last Bit Of Oxygen Left My Lungs,
I Decided That I Was Officially Done.
I Braved Up And Pulled Myself From The Bottom,
And As I Reached The Top,
He Tried To Grab Me But I Wouldn’t Allow Him To,
I Came Up And Inhaled The Beginning Of My New Life.
About the Creator
Brianna Longshaw
“Reading Is Like Breathing In, Writing Is Like Breathing Out” 🦋
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It hits me really hard thanks for sharing this poet