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I feel like a turtle

By Irene Mugang Narewec Published 8 months ago 1 min read
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One great man once said: “grave is the riches place on earth.”

Am feeling that am becoming grave to my own dreams and desires.

It’s been 2 weeks, am out of vocal,

Not because I don’t have stories to write,

Down within, it is bubbling, and it hurt to hold back.

But out there the obstacles,

What are there? O they are:

 Poor internet connectivity -should I blame the climate change?

 Ongoing power blackouts -this one I am blaming my government,

 When you have a daily plan and then the unforeseen.

It is unlikely to achieve by goal of writing x 1 story per day,

The situation is unreliable and unpredictable,

I feel like a turtle.

And the story of the turtle and rabbit inspires me too!

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About the Creator

Irene Mugang Narewec

I got inspired and motivated by other people's work. Their books and teachings molded me to become a leader and agent of change. Am here to give back to the world.

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  • Marie381Uk 8 months ago

    Brilliant poem sweetheart ⭐️🏆✍️⭐️

  • L.I.E8 months ago

    Awww this is so relatable. We do get slowed down by life. Excellent poem.

  • I often feel like a turtle too many times. We are often slowed down in many ways but we must keep pressing on. Never give up. Loved your story.

  • F. M. Rayaan8 months ago

    Irene, your honesty about these struggles really resonates! Keep pushing through those obstacles like that turtle—slow and steady wins! 🐢

  • I'm so sorry for those obstacles. Poor Internet and power blackouts are terrible. So happy to have you back!

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