OBSERVATION OF BEAUTY
A Daily Report from the Field

All people are hereby informed that:
Sunlight will enter today,
stretching across hills and fields,
turning dew into a thousand small lanterns.
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Leaves will tremble, not from fear,
but in polite acknowledgment
of the breeze passing through.
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Birds will conduct their morning councils,
each song a report of color and movement,
each wingbeat a formal declaration
that the sky belongs, for now, to them.
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Rivers will comply with gravity,
curling and glinting,
reflecting clouds that have no authority
but insist on drifting anyway.
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Be advised:
Flowers will appear without noticing.
Do not attempt to catalog them all.
Their fragrance will issue reminders
that attention is the proper response.
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Every person is required to notice:
Shadows will lengthen and retract
with precision,
yet always surprise in the way they stretch
over paths, ridges, and hidden hollers.
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Each person is instructed to breathe deeply,
to allow air to fill unclaimed spaces
and report back to the heart
the precise location of joy.
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No enforcement measures exist for beauty.
It may fall on your shoulders
like sunlight through branches,
or slip along a winding trail.
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Finally, take note:
Time, though relentless, can be patient here.
Step slowly.
Watch carefully.
Remain aware that for every day observed
in proper attention,
the world will issue its own commendation.
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This concludes the daily nature report.
Failure to comply will result only in
a mild ache of longing,
easily remedied by stepping outside.
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Beautiful and Brutal Things, his latest book.
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Comments (4)
This is something that's much needed. You've written this so beautifully. Loved it!
It's easy to get stuck in the mire of crap that's swirling all around us, but there is beauty, and serenity out there, too. A wonderful reminder, and so well written. πππ
Excellent, Tim. The optimism and call for self care and focus on nature make this not just a good read but also therapeutic.
Now this is my kind of report. Itβs practical and highly recommended for all. Thoughtful work, Tim!