Oblivious

A comic and poem about an ignored unfinished character

By J. JayPublished 2 years ago • Updated 2 years ago • 1 min read

Joe’s Emo Poem

I’m stuck in purgatory,

you have my ticket out

but forgot to give it to me.

A lifeless metal shell

grey colorless terrain.

Words flash past in whirls and puffs,

electrified progress trains

I’m glued to the ground—

trapped, waiting to be free.

Why won’t you notice me?

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J. Jay

I like to share my art and writings, whether it's silly or serious. I'll also feature a comic I work on called Writing Whoas, which is about the joys and hardships of being a writer. Stick around to laugh or cry.

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Comments (4)

Shirley Belk2 years ago
Laughing and crying...
Mariann Carroll2 years ago
I so love your poem and your comic strip 🥰🥰🥰🥰Outstanding!!!
Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago
Hahahaha that certainly was relatable. I loved it!
Rick Henry Christopher 2 years ago
This was really good. I enjoyed the simple story line as well as the great illustrations. Great job J.

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