Ob-love-ion
By the PhuzzPublished 3 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by NordWood Themes on Unsplash
A guy that I knew was alone,
With every swipe left he would groan,
The girl of his dreams,
Walked past him it seems,
Cause he never looked up from his phone.
About the Creator
the Phuzz
Unfocused imaginator hoping to psych myself into getting some things out of my overstuffed mind.
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Omg - it looks to me like you submitted more than one winner to this challenge! Impressive: funny & incisive.