As Humans
Sometimes we Cry
Sometimes we Fight
Sometimes we Try
And Somedays
We Envision...
Nothing At All
Some days,
Trying to believe
In something that
You can't catch a glimpse of
Until the very Moment
Of Survival
Stands the Fright of the Journey!
As Humans
Sometimes
We wish to feel
Nothing at all
For a juncture
Of your precious time...
Think about Equality Before Your Judgment!
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Comments (20)
I love the message in this poem❤️
i love the grace that I read between the struggle. Beautifully written !
Lovely and moving, while it still makes you think. You have a rare gift with words and feelings!
Love it ❤🌹
This was so deep and emotional!
I really enjoyed this one!
Such a thought-provoking and emotional poem✨ love it❤️
I love this! You really captured the raw emotions of what it means to be human and what it means to be alive! Beautiful! 💜
Lonzo, I love your poetry and look forward to each time you post! Thank you for sharing your heartfelt words! I’m off to leave you a tip now. It’s not much, I know, but I wanted to show my appreciation 💕🙂
Happy to read
a lovely poem that describes the ups and downs of the human.thankz for sharing it...............🙏👌👌👌
This is a poignant and thought-provoking poem that speaks to the many complexities and contradictions of the human experience. The poem explores the range of emotions and experiences that we go through as humans, from crying and fighting to trying and envisioning. The juxtaposition of these different states of being highlights the complexity of the human condition, and the fact that we are capable of experiencing a wide range of emotions and thoughts at any given moment. One of the most striking elements of the poem is its call for empathy and understanding, particularly in the face of judgment. The line "Think about Equality Before Your Judgment!" is a powerful reminder of the importance of treating others with kindness and compassion, rather than rushing to judgment or criticism. This sentiment is particularly resonant in today's world, where divisiveness and hostility often seem to dominate public discourse. Overall, this is a well-crafted and deeply moving poem that captures the essence of the human experience with skill and sensitivity. Your use of language is powerful and evocative, and the poem's themes of empathy and understanding are ones that are sure to resonate with readers.
Very strong message and well written! Great piece!
I guess You could say that nothing at all is a great equalizer when it comes to thought, preparation, inspiration, and perspiration. Until You've been pushed to the very brink You'll either have nothing at all, or everything will be clear and all the noise will fall to the waistside. Leaving You with nothing at all but brilliance.
Wonderful piece.
Always great messages in your words. Thanks for them,
Poignant & powerful, bridging the gap between surrender & fight, ending with fighting words that call for grace. Beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
very well said Your Mind is A Wonderland of Your Imagination Make it Beautiful!
Great poem! 💞💫
Nice piece Lonzo, 😀