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Not letting Words get in the Way!

Just letting the Sunshine have it's Day

By Jay LeTron DobbinsPublished 10 months ago 3 min read

Like watching the sunset go, there’s no comparison to this show! I can sit back and hold my words, but I’d take my chances on saying the greatest thing she ever heard!

Everyday you shine! It’s a highlight of my day! I want send you flowers in May, and the day after the next day!

Right now is better than never, I like to tell you that I’m here to whatever and whenever! I walk you through the stormy weather!

In your eyes I see a special glow, I know holding my words and enjoying beauty was supposed to be the flow, since tomorrow’s not promised I had to let you know!

Caught me right under the chin! Seeing you in dress it’s like a new feeling that has no end! Can stop the way you make heart skip beats! You are a sight for all eyes and can withstand the greatest heat!

Amazing is the way that you are to me! Can really think about what others think, I just need you next to me!

Erica, you are a fine bottle of wine, paired with the featured meal at the fanciest restaurant. You may not get into much of men giving your beauty a descriptive manner, and those affirmations may not even be your love banner!

You make writing easy for me! I always seem to find words when I see your picture or even think about you. Now statistics say that the good guy never reaps the good benefits of a woman such as you! So luving the way I openly communicate with you doesn’t matter to me! Somehow, I just can’t let these words go unnoticed and the world has to be blind if they don’t see what I see!

Nonetheless, that’s what wrong with the world today! Not enough lifting each other up and giving good folk recognition! I often dream of you riding with me and together touching the start button on my caddy’s ignition!

Yet, you don’t have to be my woman or wife for me to tell you how good you look! Someone needs to stop and acknowledge that when it comes to beauty, BLACK woken wrote the book!

Should I need any other reason to give you a general praise? There’s no lie, if we were together, I’d give my best to the end of days!

But yet, I was supposed to be silent and not let my words get in the way! Just let the sun fade away to another day! Maybe you find favor to come my way! So let me continue to sit back and enjoy the view! Just know that you give energy that makes me feel beyond new!

Can’t and won’t try to speak for no one else! You are worth a hand-written letter with a pen from my slightly dusty shelf!

Woman, I can write a book about you and can never repeat a line and give you many reasons as to why I feel the way that I do!

No, AI cannot write the way that I do! AI cannot feel the things that I do! AI may have a systemic flow and a mechanical sequence. However, AI can never match my level and will for luv dominance!

So now, let me retreat into silence as my words retire for the moment as I watch her silently slay! I’ll just dream about the moment of her changing her mind and making my day!

OK, I try to be quiet, but it’s rude to have your beauty speak to me, and not to say anything back!

love poems

About the Creator

Jay LeTron Dobbins

Casual writer! Love to express in print! Tell people how you feel and love life to the fullest with no regrets. Try to say something good about a person when they can hear it, and not when they are gone! Love like no tomorrow.

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