
Oh me, oh my
I saw you fly
Into my arms
From afar, I drew you
Near, like art
You make me sigh
Tear, a part
of the hole
When you nigh
Cry, a line on the skin
Blue dot, red ink, tonight
Your eyes my head spin
I am the same
Song you sing
You are the main tale
I tell and hear
From up here
What a view
When you come near
Me, I will show
You, walk on the sand
Of your aisle and
If you ask for my hand
In the Fall
I will stand
Tall
And come to your land
On the day you were born
If you say
Yes in Noel
Ask me back if you dare
And I will
Nod yes if
I do.
About the Creator
Edoardo Segato-Figueroa
Storyteller, Singer-songwriter. Husband and dog dad.
Author of "Countercurrent", Italian biography of Nikola Tesla.
Sci-fi and Cli-fi novellas. Sciencey essays.
Co-founder of NYADO and producer of Mission to Earth music-film.
Reader insights
Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
Top insight
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions


Comments (3)
Great use of enjambment here Edoardo, it really adds so much nuance to so many of the lines.
Wow, intense.
Rushed, breathless, the scattered communications of one who desperately wants to get it right yet fails miserably... ...& still is understood.