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Nocturnal

A Haiku

By Natasha CollazoPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - July 2024
Nocturnal
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Please forgive me for

all of the times I chose not

to see you for you.

HaikuMental Health

About the Creator

Natasha Collazo

Selected Writer in Residency, Champagne France ---2026

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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    Creative use of language & vocab

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  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    This was an amazing and packed a punch for such a small bit of poetry. Congratulations on the Top Story - it's well deserved.

  • Shanon Angermeyer Normanabout a year ago

    Superior brevity.

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Epic !

  • Christina Vanhaerentsabout a year ago

    Yay top story! This is so good also!

  • Gloria Penelopeabout a year ago

    Back to say congratulations!!!

  • trisno widodoabout a year ago

    omg

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Rachel Steinmetzabout a year ago

    This is so poignant in so few words! Nice job!

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Oh, we can all use this one for our loved ones. Fabulous job!! 🎈🎈Congratulations on TS😍

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    Brilliant

  • Vicki Lawana Trusselli about a year ago

    Congratulations on your top story 🌹

  • Raymond G. Taylorabout a year ago

    Back to say congrats!

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Nice!!! 🔥 Congrats on your TS!

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    Why I was so late to read this! Top story, congrats!!!!!!!

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Great haiku, Natasha! Congrats on Top Story!

  • Raymond G. Taylorabout a year ago

    So powerful, so few words!

  • That was so deep and poignant. Loved your Haiku!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Oh! That last line really pulls it all together. Nicely done.

  • Gloria Penelopeabout a year ago

    I loved the ending, very powerful haiku.

  • angela hepworthabout a year ago

    Very powerful work.

  • So simple, but with so much power. Great job, Natasha!

  • Testabout a year ago

    "I chose not to see you for you" Amazing!

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