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Hot drips on my shirt
Soaking my heart , but they dry
so they'll never know.
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Colleen Walters
Just a girl who likes to write poems, usually inspired by events and people in my Florida life.. Always be you, because you are awesome. You matter. You are enough.. β€οΈ
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It's difficult for me to know where to start with a review of this book as it was, for me, an entirely unique experience and one that I'll probably never have again. I don't want that to be interpreted as unenjoyable but it has left me scratching my head a little and ruminating on its content, its themes and its characters.
By Rachel Deemingabout 11 hours ago in BookClub
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Oh wow, it was so beautiful the way you portrayed crying here. Loved it!
This is heartbreaking and beautiful.
πππ€well done
I find this piece relating to silent suffering and I feel very closely to this piece. Raw and real.