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Nimai's Temple

In a small village nestled among the lush green fields of Bengal

By Dabasish PalPublished about a year ago 2 min read
Nimai's Temple
Photo by Nitin Pouniker on Unsplash

In a small village nestled among the lush green fields of Bengal, lived a young boy named Nimai. His world was simple, confined to the narrow paths winding through the paddy fields, the dense bamboo groves, and the occasional banyan tree where the village elders gathered to discuss everything from the upcoming harvest to tales of the supernatural.

Nimai was a dreamer. While other boys of his age played by the riverside or helped their fathers in the fields, Nimai would wander alone, lost in his thoughts. His greatest pleasure was to sit by the old pond, its surface covered with lotus leaves, and imagine stories of distant lands. The village elders often remarked that Nimai had an old soul, wise beyond his years.

One day, while wandering deeper into the forest than he had ever gone before, Nimai stumbled upon an old, forgotten temple. It was overgrown with vines, and the once grand stone carvings were now worn and cracked. But to Nimai, it was a place of wonder. He could almost hear the chants of priests and the soft tinkling of bells from a time long past.

As Nimai explored the temple, he found a small idol hidden among the ruins. It was a simple figure, carved from stone, but to Nimai, it was a treasure. He carefully carried it back to the village, showing it to his mother, who smiled at his excitement but warned him to be careful. The temple, she said, was a place of the old gods, forgotten by most but still powerful in their own way.

But Nimai was not afraid. Each day after his chores, he would return to the temple, bringing offerings of flowers and fruits. He would sit for hours, speaking to the idol as if it were a friend, sharing his dreams and fears. In return, the forest seemed to come alive around him—the trees whispered secrets, and the animals appeared to watch over him.

As the years passed, Nimai grew older, but he never forgot the temple. Even as responsibilities pulled him away from his carefree days, he would always find time to visit the old stone idol, seeking solace and wisdom in its silent presence.

One monsoon season, the rains were particularly fierce. The river swelled, threatening to overflow and flood the village. The elders were worried, and the villagers prayed for the rains to stop. But Nimai, now a young man, felt a strange calm. He knew what he had to do.

With the village watching anxiously, Nimai made his way to the temple in the pouring rain. He placed the idol at the edge of the riverbank, offering it the finest garlands he could find. As he prayed, the winds seemed to still, and the waters, though high, did not breach their banks.

The village was spared, and Nimai became a quiet hero, known not for his strength or wisdom, but for his faith. The temple, once forgotten, became a place of pilgrimage for those seeking guidance or simply a moment of peace.

Years later, when Nimai was old and frail, he still visited the temple, now a well-tended shrine. And though his body was weak, his spirit remained strong, nourished by the quiet companionship of the old stone idol, the forest, and the memories of a boy who had once dreamed by a lotus-covered pond.

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About the Creator

Dabasish Pal

Hey there, story lovers! I'm Dabasish Pal, and I write the kind of stories that keep you up way past your bedtime ( don't worry, I've been there too!). Get ready for some twist, turns and maybe even few feels.

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  • Sanjay Upadhyayabout a year ago

    amazing work

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