hello darkness my old friend,
when will this nightmare ever end?
during the dozing sequence of the brain,
dreams take hold of life again,
sweet dreams they were,
in days of past,
now sweetness dissolved,
how long can it last?
I awaken and scream,
“the dream is done”,
only to realize, it has just begun!
sleepless nights are now the norm,
tossing and turning, my brain starts to squirm,
now drenched in darkness,
I turn to my friend, asking will you please deliver the end?
take yourself into the dawn,
be replaced with the light of day,
where the dreams of darkness, are whisked away!
Took first line fromSounds of Silence as you may well know, was posting some songs on FB and when this one started, that first line struck the poetic nerve, and words quivered thru the keyboard, hope you all enjoyed.
About the Creator
Moe Radosevich
I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you
Write on my friends
Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Keep reading
More stories from Moe Radosevich and writers in Poets and other communities.
Moments Past
ghosting throughout time, reliving moments endured, verifying life! this is my final “time” haiku. I thank everyone for all the reads and kind comments of support, but more so, I congratulate everyone for the phenomenal amount of awesomeness presented in each haiku I was honored to read, great job everyone, you’re all winners!!’
By Moe Radosevich3 years ago in Poets
Rachel Reviews: The Spiral Archive by Pieter Hendrik
It's difficult for me to know where to start with a review of this book as it was, for me, an entirely unique experience and one that I'll probably never have again. I don't want that to be interpreted as unenjoyable but it has left me scratching my head a little and ruminating on its content, its themes and its characters.
By Rachel Deemingabout 6 hours ago in BookClub
Comments (3)
If even continued to match the rhythm of the song for a couple of lines 😁 “Now Drenched in darkness” was such a great line!!
Love this! It was singing to me. ❤️
This was so brilliant of you! It was fantastic!