
Old hag comes to rest
Upon my chest…..night’s terror
Ensues with each breath
About the Creator
Cindy Calder
From Charleston SC - "I am still learning." Michelangelo

Old hag comes to rest
Upon my chest…..night’s terror
Ensues with each breath
From Charleston SC - "I am still learning." Michelangelo
Comments (5)
Scary in many ways. Good job.
The old hag can certainly bring a image of terror! Nicely done.
Loving the slant rhyme as well as the terror of suffocating dream paralysis! Very well-wrought.
This is as scary as a remembered nightmare sending the covers off the bed! Great challenge entry, Cindy! Good luck!
Omgggg, this is a veryyyyy scary experience. I hate when that happens