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New Tradition

Prompt 6/30/2025

By Ellie HoovsPublished 7 months ago 1 min read

When the midnight oil has waned,

and the candles waxed,

puddles of sage-scented sandalwood

pooled on oaken tableaus,

the scent of sulfur and kerosene

all that remains to show that something,

anything,

had burned here.

-

When the moon has hidden his face,

to shine upon some distant galaxy,

forgetting the steady, long-loved sun,

the tides pulled out and away,

no longer holding the sand,

leaving it to shiver in the damp of forgotten froth.

-

When the camp fire dies,

and the last of the hopeful dancing embers

shrivel,

their pirouettes curling into gray streams

of unrequited smoke,

fresh logs lay dreaming of pyres,

as orange fades to black,

marshmallows piled, unroasted,

in bags that won't be opened.

-

what is left,

once everything has died,

but... to make new light.

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About the Creator

Ellie Hoovs

Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.

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  • Sandy Gillman7 months ago

    That last line hits with such gentle hope. Loved this.

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