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The dawn's almost here,
Bad things we did yesterday
Don't matter no more.
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Brightness clears the sky
The sun replaces all the stars
The new day's ahead.
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I love the realistic but optimistic tone of this duo.
I likes yours Haiku.
A great perspective for a haiku!
A new day dawns! This is beautiful !
That is I always think on, when I got a real bad day. New day will come! It it is not better, still have to wait for the next one! https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=2ahUKEwiN14ie2LWGAxW1UEEAHVxbCfkQ78AJegQIEBAB&url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DjP4-XrbGt3M&usg=AOvVaw1sZlZx96wDAFdnskm95Zr8&opi=89978449
Very sweet and upbeat. :3 You're really great at this.
Oh! How positive these feeling are. Cleverly done it and thanks for planting such a thought in readers mind. I also learned Haiku duo method from you.
Lovely haikus!
This inspired me to think again within a few seconds..loved it!
Sweet!
Lovely ray of sunshine!
Lovely poem and sentiment!
Nice! 😊
yay! for a new day ahead
Depends how bad the bad things were, but love the hopefulness in this
If those bad things don't matter, prisons would be empty hahahahaha. Sorry couldn't help myself. Loved your twin Haiku!