Deeply burrowed in silken sheets
Intimately, wantonly, she meets my eyes
Sensually her tongue glides wetly over red lips
Teasingly she lowers the sheet just a bit
Ravishing, ravenous, pure femininity
Areolae just peeking from edge of slithering silk
Curling a finger, she beckons me nearer
Twisting seductively 'neath blanket she raises the covers
Image of warm, soft, beautifully tanned skin just glimpsed
"Only you my love," she whispers, patting the bed next to her
Nevermore alone... I slip into her heavenly embrace
About the Creator
Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp
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Well done!
Very romantic. Great job.
This was so wonderfully intimate!