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Need to Do Better

an acrostic

By Muchtar SuryawanPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Need to Do Better
Photo by Gioele Fazzeri on Unsplash

Meals left uneaten, bites of chicken or handfuls of rice in the trashcan

Under the darkness of night, they run their hands over their body

Checking how prominent their bones are, their ribcage,

Hip bones, how close their hands are to meeting in the middle of

Their stomach, tight with worry and

Anxiety stemming from thoughts of how they need to do better,

Repeating memories in their head of “You need to eat more.”

AcrosticMental Healthsad poetry

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Muchtar Suryawan

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  • Tales by J.J.about a year ago

    poignant piece captures the silent struggle and anxiety

  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    The honesty of this. Hit me hard. Take care.

  • Testabout a year ago

    I love the intensity of you poem for such a hard topic to face

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