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Necromancy

(Attempting to Raise the Dead)

By Poppy Published 3 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
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1.

When the corner of his mouth turns up like the breaking of a wave, don’t translate your racing heartbeats to mean you are in love. The thudding sound that echoes from your chest is a war cry - a warning being screamed at you the only way your body knows how.

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When his hand collides with your skin and your breaths leave you like your past lovers, move his hand away and don’t daydream about it later.

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He will hand you distance like it is a bouquet of flowers and you will accept it like it is the invitation to a funeral of someone you can reincarnate. You cannot raise the dead darling. You cannot keep him breathing.

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He is already empty.

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This is an excerpt from Wasted Love.

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock3 years ago

    Without the slap, the distance remains, hollowed out & empty, never to rise again.

  • He will hand you distance like it is a bouquet of flowers and you will accept it like it is the invitation to a funeral of someone you can reincarnate. You cannot raise the dead darling. You cannot keep him breathing. This was just so deep and true! I loved it!

  • Mackenzie Davis3 years ago

    Chills. This felt like it came from a deep place. I thoroughly enjoyed the creepiness I felt at the end. It made me go back and re read it. "When the corner of his mouth turns up like the breaking of a wave" Love the nuance of this line. There's room for it to be ominous but also charming...and both work. Well done! I'm gonna check out your poetry collection.

  • He will hand you distance like it is a bouquet of flowers-clever❤️😉📝❗

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