Mystique
The narrow-sparrow way
His
Mystique
and
Her
Physique
Piqued
His interest
and
Parted
Her heart
as they
Flowed
and
Rowed
Down rivers
Bright
What height
and depth
of lavish love
They
wished and lived
and
Finally said
Goodbye plight
And hello
to
Narrow
Pilgrimage
to Heaven's Gate
As sparrows
Fly
They flew
to
Abraham's bosom
Jesus's joy
and
loving gaze
Glorious rays
Angelic praise
Musical haze
Journey
through
Eternity
About the Creator
Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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Comments (3)
“Lavish love” is so beautiful to think about, and even more beautiful to experience. Great job
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The imagery that you created here is beautiful, great job! 😁