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My suicide thoughts.

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By Jacare FreemanPublished 4 years ago 1 min read
My suicide thoughts.
Photo by Reza Hasannia on Unsplash

There is no doubt that my mind is lost

I see no gain on getting away

I was so deep in my problems that 

I tried with the ocean drown 

My zodiacal sign is Cetus, 

No one has ever say how it is

without calculus 

We can agree on this

I hold a big leviathan in me, 

the monster who tried to Androneda eat. 

People saw an enemy on me, 

there was no surprise because I saw that before in me. 

no one else in the mirror than mine

ugly reflections, a big reptile head and tail of a fish my hands of a handy mammal to transform. 

There is no nation 

to the monster under the sea, 

there is just think, revenge and an angel to be. 

The real fight was in me, not in the outside but with me.

See myself and allow me to please, to be loved and to share the joy. 

I was no able to understand,

only one heart, one nation, 

we are just love. 

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Jacare Freeman

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