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My soul is in turmoil

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By Kisama Riyo Published 7 months ago 1 min read

I am here to congratulate my friends.

Let them return to me as beloved ones.

The land is mine, so I forget my loneliness.

And I draw near to the veiled sun.

I give them a rose, so I forget my loneliness.

Here I am, a prisoner of torment.

I have suffered in silence for years.

Until my weeping increased, and my wailing intensified.

And I found nothing but the radiance of a sun that seduced me.

Did my tears fall like rain from the clouds?

And the pain is as deep as fire, igniting my passion.

Who said that if I cry, I will melt the snow?

And I tear off the shackles of my emotions and let myself melt.

Ah, the delirium of longing that drives me closer.

The closer I get, the more confused I am. My pulse slows, and the reasons become complete.

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About the Creator

Kisama Riyo

I have always been interested in poetry and essay, especially rhyme style, so I decided to post my essay here and see if I have any talent in poetry or not.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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