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My Precious Wind.....

A fascinating dream journey by, P.A.Vinura Jayasanka

By P.A.Vinura JayasankaPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
My Precious Wind.....
Photo by Oliver Hihn on Unsplash

Don't remember,

when I started,

feeling you,

anyway, there's no need,

to think about it,

as I feel you right now,

so my precious wind,

you come, hug and cuddle me,

and suddenly vanish away,

as if you never,

going to return,

but right when,

I recall you,

you come up as usual,

have I ever seen you?

NO! Never!

then how do I feel,

you so much like this?

I've heard you murmuring,

whispering, and giggling,

with trees and high hills,

that's how I used to find you,

But I certainly know,

how rapidly you can,

turn into a severe storm,

with a huge rage of fury,

and I also know,

how you burst into tears,

and weep solemnly,

when you find the truth,

it's the way I feel you,

and draw a picture of some kind,

on you, I know that will,

never be the real picture of you,

so my precious wind,

you take my sweat,

tiredness and despair,

in a mind-relieving way,

and give me,

a chilling and sweet feeling,

that I don't know to say,

when I smoothly, investigate,

your behavior is a mystery,

you carry countless molecules,

and tons of tiny droplets,

to a destination, I have never seen,

I can touch you- I thought for a while,

then I understood,

you are perfectly intangible,

but I can feel you,

so my precious wind,

I love to witness,

you hang around me,

as far as I live.....

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About the Creator

P.A.Vinura Jayasanka

Hi! I'm an EE Engineering UG who is passionate on poetry and movie critiques with mastering both creative and analytical aspects. You can follow me on fb:

https://web.facebook.com/people/Vin-J-Writer/61555864435081/?mibextid=ZbWKwL

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  • Rowan Finley about a year ago

    Nice job! 👍

  • Sasi Kala2 years ago

    Excellent! Loved your poem.

  • Wow! This is so beautiful! I love it!

  • Well done nature lover!

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