The natural beauty of my woman,
Awakens a sense of tranquility that swirls,
My head into a whirlpool of emotions.
Love is a fervent stream that flows,
Through the endless river that drifts,
Straight into the depths of my heart.
Sentiment that lies in the depths of
Her eyes, flourishes my soul with
An urge to taste such goodly lips.
For it, the world becomes anew,
And the transfer of touches grows
A sense of being closer to divine.
Whispers of the future entwine
Our hearts, that beat in unison,
With the endless night of the sky.
I hope you enjoy this small love letter and that will touch your heart. Give some love and comment, I want to hear your thoughts.
Thank you.
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"Do It Again" the track that would ultimately open the Beach Boys final album on Capitol Records which was released on February 10th 1969 had originally been released as a single in August of 1968. The track was the first of many post-Pet Sounds era throwbacks to the early Beach Boys sound which would become continually more cliched and eventually lead the Beach Boys to the level of self-parody they would eventually succumb to in the 1980s while their closest contemporaries The Beatles nearing the end of their run in 1969 would go on to be viewed as the most influential band of all time. However, the song itself is not bad on its surface, and it opens with a futuristic sounding (for 1969) drumbeat captured by then-Beach Boys engineer Stephen Desper using tape delays on the drums performed by Dennis Wilson and John Guerin. The song has been re-recorded numerous times over the years on various Beach Boys-related projects most notably the 2011 re-recording at Capitol studios featuring the five surviving Beach Boys at the time backed instrumentally by various members of both the Brian Wilson Band and Mike Loves touring "Beach Boys" to promote the then upcoming Beach Boys 50th Anniversary reunion tour in 2012. The hammering and power drill sound at the end of the song was an excerpt from a track called "Workshop" that was to be a part of the uncompleted "SMiLE" album.
By Sean Callaghan6 days ago in Beat
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"Love is a fervent stream that flows," LOVE!
This poem is such a Wholesome ode to your love ❤ The simplicity of the flow and the wonderful words used made the poem feel deep inside ✨👏 "Our hearts, that beat in unison, With the endless night of the sky.", It's like the perfect end to it... For me, as a lover of poems; I feel like poems are the best gift. So, If she's reading—Your beautiful woman; She must be so happy and warm ❤✨