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My First Love Encounter

A Poem by Jesse D

By The Annoying BalloonPublished 8 years ago 1 min read

I walked into the gym

My life was feeling grim

I seen you wearing blue

The dress just as gorgeous as you

If I got asked you out, lucky him

You had the most prettiest face

When I approached, my heart began to race

I wanted a chance

I asked you to dance

And well, you just laughed in my face

I went home and cried many tears

I never felt pain like this in years

You truly made me hurt

I now feel like dirt

You caused me to have dating fears

I took a razor to my arm

It looks more red then a barn

Bloods dripping on the floor

The lock is turned on the door

My sobs grow louder than animals on a farm

I hope your proud of your self

You truly impacted my health

My vision gets blurry

Someone save me hurry!

It's too late, I done killed myself

You took away my heart

You stomped it and ripped it apart

I thought you would be the one

But instead I was burned by the sun

I will never again mend my heart

heartbreak

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