My Exhale

One leaf remains, I—
Bated breath, frozen hands--wait,
Rush, snap, gone. Silence.
About the Creator
Aubrey Rebecca
My writing lives in the liminal spaces where memoir meets myth, where contradictions—grief/joy, addiction/love, beauty/ruin—tangle together. A Sagittarius, I am always exploring, searching for the story beneath the story. IG: @tapestryofink
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insight
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions


Comments (3)
This is beautiful 😍 Congratulations on placing in the challenge.
Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
I like the anticipation that you were able to bring out! Awesome job!