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My drawbacks

Life's drawbacks

By HIRA LALPublished 5 years ago 1 min read

My drawbacks

Please.....

Is here any one ?

Who make of my faults,

Whether I am degree holder,

However, I am unable access to faults,

Please..... call in,

Please....

Pay to taunt me,

Rather, I knew error of mine,

Even if, No one has perfection,

Please.... carry out,

Please.....

Revealing mine,

That, draw out my flounder,

Don't need me inter into like others, Please.... search in,

Please....

Don't hesitate

Reflecting my deficiency,

Whereas, every one deal with,

Please..... try it,

Please....

See over my hidden faults,

Let not allows me concealing faults,

Whether, everybody interesting to conceal,

Please.... lay down

Please.....

Let me allow to explain away,

If, No take me on, through mine research,

Perhaps, I black, dwarf, weak, ignorant,unknown,poor

Please.... sure it,

Please....

Don't make a guile,

Alone dig out my drawbacks,

But these by nature not mine mistake, Please.... consider it,

Please.....

Call down to nature,

Born pleasance people,

Who free from such drawbacks, Please... call down,

Please.....

Recognise the truth,

Perhaps, due my these drawbacks,

I am still one side lover and celibacy, Please.... justice it.

surreal poetry

About the Creator

HIRA LAL

About author

I am english poet and writer. My some poems have been published in America as justice of nature and services of trees without. i have written poems on .ct as on Nature, Love, Sorrow, Life, Religion, spiritual and Modern age

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