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My Death Is Riding High

On Five Clear Clouds

By Patrick M. OhanaPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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My death is riding high on five clear clouds

It isn’t high enough but it’s stable

I feel enveloped in blue-and-white shrouds

It must be some large part of my fable

Goddess Athena reveals one main truth

Kissing my forehead a number of times

The Goddess of Wisdom only in sooth

Plays to those who seek Her love’s final chimes

Is it better to have loved and lost than

Never to have loved at all, the poet

Laments, dressed in a transparent caftan

Thinking of the Greek nymph who could show it

Cloud following cloud penetrates my skin

As I’m becoming a part of the spin

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Another way of riding high

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Patrick M. Ohana

A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.

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